I'm sorry Phab my man, but you need to get it translated again. The video looks great, I'd like to give you a higher rating. You should get someone to translate your first post into smooth english.
I like the "stlyish" and "clean" plate you had there... and the idea is ok, even if I don't totaly agree :D
You should change the "rock" thing at the end, way too aggressive compared to what you put in the begining, it breaks all the atomsphere.
P.S : I'm not a fan of the signature thing at the end, I'm not saying this only for you but for all the videos with some kind of signature. It's about giving credits to Linux, not to ourselves.
Just my 2 cents...
Thumbs up !
A.
Salut, Phabrice,
Votre video est tres bien fait (felicitations!) sauf les sous-titres en anglais. Si vous voulez bien le permettre, je voudrais vous offrir quelques suggestions pour ameliorer les sous-titres ...
[Windows] Made to be sold [ou peut-etre] Made to be marketed
[Apple] Made for graphic design [ou] Made for design
[Linux] Made to be used
A la fin du video, "Don't try to buy it, it's free" est 100% correcte.
Bonne chance & A bientot,
=kalwisti
On what CorperPictures said...I actually expected "made for freedom" for the linux logo. :P But what was really there made me smile even so.
I also agree that the aggressiveness at the end makes the ad icky. =/
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Subscribe to Comments FeedCorperPictures said:
Instead of "Think for using" how about think for freedom?
justintime03_2 said:
I'm sorry Phab my man, but you need to get it translated again. The video looks great, I'd like to give you a higher rating. You should get someone to translate your first post into smooth english.
justcallmenobody said:
I like the "stlyish" and "clean" plate you had there... and the idea is ok, even if I don't totaly agree :D You should change the "rock" thing at the end, way too aggressive compared to what you put in the begining, it breaks all the atomsphere. P.S : I'm not a fan of the signature thing at the end, I'm not saying this only for you but for all the videos with some kind of signature. It's about giving credits to Linux, not to ourselves. Just my 2 cents... Thumbs up ! A.
kalwisti said:
Salut, Phabrice, Votre video est tres bien fait (felicitations!) sauf les sous-titres en anglais. Si vous voulez bien le permettre, je voudrais vous offrir quelques suggestions pour ameliorer les sous-titres ... [Windows] Made to be sold [ou peut-etre] Made to be marketed [Apple] Made for graphic design [ou] Made for design [Linux] Made to be used A la fin du video, "Don't try to buy it, it's free" est 100% correcte. Bonne chance & A bientot, =kalwisti
phab said:
merci kalwisti, voilà qui est fait, j'ai uploader une nouvelle version. phabrice et véronique
linux_underpants said:
It should have ended after "donlt try to buy it, it's free"...
rpryor said:
this would make a great commercial by itself
ikusari said:
On what CorperPictures said...I actually expected "made for freedom" for the linux logo. :P But what was really there made me smile even so. I also agree that the aggressiveness at the end makes the ad icky. =/
Andra said:
Its not a new OS LOL its a ditsro. Make your own ditsro if you want, just a little choice in your life maybe.